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Ahh finally I had the chance to "really" work on a picture again. Such a good feeling :D
And I did some KH-Fanart again...does happen all few months :)

Sora, Axel, Riku, Roxas (c) Square Enix
Art by me :heart:
Sketched and Colored with Watercolours on Paper. Touched up on PS. Time taken: few days ^^'

Critiques


:icondrachenmagier:
*pops knuckles and gets to typing*

The colouring is getting better and better. =^^= Especially this mix of green blue and a bit of violet is very nice to look at (even though Axls hair and costume bite every other colour on the drawing... but hey, that guy is born to stand out).

First thing I noticed was the way you added shadows of flying objects like the dragonfly. Really good. ^^ On the other side you left those shadows almost completely out when it comes to the figures on the leafs, which makes the drawing look a lot flatter than intended. The light of the whole drawing comes from the lower right, you should have sticked to that for the charas too. Especially the Axel-Frog would have gotten a lot more depth by this.

Non the less the image is definitely appealing for the eye. =^^= (just wanted to have said that once more).

The metallic effect of the dragonfly came out great! And the grass is a great idea to give the whole work more details without overfilling it. Plus, from what I can see you start to work with focus points! :heart:

I dare to say you got a bit lazy with the hands this time: Normally, the hands you draw are elegant and in motion. Those here are all the same and rather stiff within those frog-gloves. I guess we can blame that on the gloves here. That swimming stuff is normally not built to let you work with your hands anymore. ;)

Alltogether a really cute picture with wonderful colours. =^^=
I really hope you'll have the original with you when we meet next time! I want to see that one! (and I bet it's not bigger than A4. Am I right? )

Originality: Group pics of KH are common but I think I ever saw one with frog costumes. XD

Technique: As said: You're getting really good with watercolours and copics. I believe you mixed the techniques here? Some of the effects are very typical for the markers.

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:icontaintedxxxrose:
Aw, how cute! I haven't played KH myself, but due to it's popularity, I'm pretty well acquainted with the characters. They're adorable here, and the use of watercolor looks great! Riku looks adorable :3

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:iconmusicyoh:
Wow! This is really cute! :D

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:iconniji-iro:
Ahh you defenitely should play it someday. It's a really really nice game. Great battle system and lovely story :)
And thank you! I still have to practrice a lot with watercolours. But they are so much fun to use :heart:
I likes to draw Riku :D

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:iconniji-iro:
Thank you so much :D I had a lot of fun drawing it ^^

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:icontaintedxxxrose:
Yeah, it's on my GIANT list of games-to-play :D There seems to be so many good ones! I doubt I'll ever get through them all XDDD

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:iconniji-iro:
Haha that's so true :D I so know what you mean XD

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:icontaintedxxxrose:
Have you played any Legend of Zelda Games?

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:iconniji-iro:
Well I started very long time ago Majorias Mask and Ocarina of Time on Game Cube, but in both I got stuck and I stopped ^^'' But I played some on Gameboy. Like Link to the Past, Minish Cap and others (can't remember all the names LOL)
And you?

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:iconmiakalin:
Oh cute!! ^-^ :heart:

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:iconniji-iro:
Aww thank you :heart:

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