....i am no good at human anatomy~maybe you should refers to any other image! but hey ..this picture..the angel looks so..calm and kinda feeling nostalgic ^^

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aww so lovely and cute I like when the draw have this color ^^

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looks really good niji! I am not so good at drawing wings too, but practice will make them good. ^_^

Haa, ich kann das fertige Bild förmlich vor mir sehen!^^
Na ja, dass die Beine etwas merkwürdig aussehen, liegt vielleicht daran, dass da ein paar Falten auf der Jacke fehlen! So im Bauchbereich...
Und den Arm müsstest du vielleicht nach vorne hin dünner werden lassen.

Also, ich warte schon gespannt auf die fertige Version!

Aww...wow~ This is so cute!! (yay! You're drawing older boys! ) You are way too good at drawing angel wings...;>w<; Don't say you're not You put in so much detail in the clothing ^^ I think everything is fine, but...that's just me! <3 I never will have problems with your art you made the scarf really well, too! And he looks so calm~ And blushing!! This is adorable! I can't wait to see the finished Good luck! <33

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awww thats so cool I really like it I love the wings too! But I think For the arm is that the fore arms to short in the pocket but the legs are great! I love it *faves*

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Its hard to explain how you could fix those, i know how I would ...but I'm terrible at getting my ideas across...

For the pocketed arm, the elbow should be higher, drawn back a bit more to the body(not much) and the shoulder raised... however, if the shoulder is relaxed, the elbow can remain where it is and should be closer to the body.

The legs might look better if there was more folds and the jacket rim was a bit higher on the stomach. The knee on the left should be slightly lower or farther out than the right, since that leg is more upright and closer to his body....

just suggestions

Even if this doesn't help you, I still think it's a really cute drawing and it does look fine the way it is. ^^

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Then an angel would come with burning eyes like stars, and bury us deep in his velvet arms.

It's wonderful! I bet angels would need a break sometimes, they must work alot.

I love the wings, also.

cuuute >w< I love it

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